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If it is so beautiful
How can it be so wrong?
And if it's not right
Then why have we been hurting all along?

If it wasn't meant to be
Then why were we made this way?
And if we were supposed to be happy
Then shouldn't this love be okay?

Why should we torture ourselves
And not be who we want to be?
And why should we be sometimes hated
By our own hurtful society?

Why should we not love
When sometimes there is so little out there?
And why shouldn't we appreciate this
When we are people who care?

But most of all I wonder
Why does it have to be real?
Shouldn't we just accept each other
And be completely honest with what we feel?
I wrote this poem thinking about how Bi's/Gay's/Lesbian's are often judged or misunderstood. I had been thinking about how a lot of people think it is wrong, when it isn't. And these are just my thoughts about it.
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Gloria155 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Dude that peom is awesome ^w^ I love it!! Continue like that i'm with you!
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In-Love-With-ZaDr Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012
so true, i love it
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Sunsetsurfer21 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i love this
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lostinlove15 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I love this. Thank you for posting it. :) Definatley faving this.
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